白雲の章 White Clouds Chapter
孤月の節 Lone Moon Moon[1]Translating 節 as “moon” makes this translation sound awful. 節 actually does not literally mean moon, but interval of time (in this case, dividing the year).
Since months are based on the moon, “moon” was probably the best translation available.
争覇の幕開け The Opening Act of Conquest
Summary of changes:
- Rhea’s initial reaction is surprise, rather than indignation.
- Caspar only followed after Edelgard by accident.
- Caspar comforts Bernadetta by comparing her situation with Ferdinand’s much crappier situation.
- Hubert says he doesn’t care about reasons for fighting only on this occasion.
- Edelgard doesn’t just talk about her experience, but the experience of all noble children in the Empire.
- Hubert talks about Byleth’s importance in the students joining, not in some future role.
- Edelgard makes it clearer that the purpose of the conversation is to get Byleth’s approval.
- Edelgard says she can get some Kingdom and Alliance nobles to cooperate, rather than them offering their support.
- Hubert saying he overstepped was 100% sarcastic.
- The Black Eagle Strike Force is pronounced “Schwarz Adler Wehr”.
- Byleth pisses off Edelgard by saying she’s trying too hard to be cool.
- Gilbert asks Annette for forgiveness, not the Goddess.
- Rhea makes it sounds less like Cyril died in this battle.
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Notes
| ↑1 | Translating 節 as “moon” makes this translation sound awful. 節 actually does not literally mean moon, but interval of time (in this case, dividing the year). Since months are based on the moon, “moon” was probably the best translation available. |
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