紅花の章　Safflower Chapter
天馬の節　Pegasus Moon
剣と盾の螺旋　Spiral of the Sword and Shield

Summary of changes:

• Hubert does not say Rodrigue may of seized Arianrhod, but rather that Rodrigue may have grasped that Count Rowe is helping the Empire.
• Byleth’s second choice about Edelgard’s screaming is different.  Choosing option 1, then option 2 in the localization reads weirdly.
• Ailell is the valley of purgatory, not torment.
• The Empire is specifically surveying Garreg Mach, not guarding it.
• Alois doesn’t mention his promise to protect Byleth.
• Seteth calls Rhea’s emotions so strong, that he thinks they must be bad karma.
• What Rhea wants to do to Byleth sounds more intense.
• Edelgard tells Hubert to spread the news that they were victorious.

Previous: Chapter 14 (Crimson Flower) | Next: Chapter 16 (Crimson Flower)

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紅花の章　Safflower Chapter
守護の節　Guardian Moon
卓上の鬼神　Demon of the Tabletop^[1]Tabletop is used in many contexts to refer to theory.  Together, they mean something like a fearsome master of theorycraft.

Summary of changes:

• The reason the pro-Imperial and anti-Imperial factions have the same strength is because Claude manipulated them to be.
• Rather than entering/leaving Derdriu being difficult, there was a large volume of people entering and leaving.
• Marianne tries to justify herself to Hilda.
• Claude claims he was joking about wishing that Byleth picked him.
• Claude maintains a cocky attitude when he loses.
• Claude wouldn’t mind joining Byleth and Edelgard if he didn’t have other plans.
• Edelgard didn’t say the Empire would join the Alliance without conflict if she lost.  She says the Alliance would have crushed the Empire with an uninjured army if she died at Derdriu.
• Another removed Petra grammar joke.

Previous: Chapter 13 (Crimson Flower) | Next: Chapter 15 (Crimson Flower)

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紅花の章　Safflower Chapter
星辰の節　Constellation Moon
血路の先へ　Onward on the Bloody Path

Summary of changes:

• It is clarified that the Church becomes part of the Kingdom’s government.
• The villager that finds Byleth has a regional dialect.
• The villager tries to give Byleth advice, not say he won’t speak bad about him.
• Edelgard feels specifically frustration/regret, rather than guilt.
• Dorothea seeing Byleth gives her the will to live again.
• Ferdinand talks about wishing Byleth was there everyday, rather than certainty that Byleth was alive everyday.
• Judith’s nickname is translated as “Heroine”, or literally “Fierce Lady”.
• Acheron uses a cutesy boy honorific for himself.
• Ignatz is not as harsh to Raphael when they fight.
• Ignatz calls himself useless when he dies.
• Acheron, like other villians, had his mannerisms reduced.
• Ferdinand quoting Edelgard was about “an extra push”, not Byleth in particular.

Previous: Chapter 12 (Crimson Flower) | Next: Chapter 14 (Crimson Flower)

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白雲の章　White Clouds Chapter
孤月の節　Lone Moon Moon^[1]Translating 節 as “moon” makes this translation sound awful.  節 actually does not literally mean moon, but interval of time (in this case, dividing the year).
Since months are based on the moon, “moon” was probably the best translation available.
争覇の幕開け　The Opening Act of Conquest

Summary of changes:

• Rhea’s initial reaction is surprise, rather than indignation.
• Caspar only followed after Edelgard by accident.
• Caspar comforts Bernadetta by comparing her situation with Ferdinand’s much crappier situation.
• Hubert says he doesn’t care about reasons for fighting only on this occasion.
• Edelgard doesn’t just talk about her experience, but the experience of all noble children in the Empire.
• Hubert talks about Byleth’s importance in the students joining, not in some future role.
• Edelgard makes it clearer that the purpose of the conversation is to get Byleth’s approval.
• Edelgard says she can get some Kingdom and Alliance nobles to cooperate, rather than them offering their support.
• Hubert saying he overstepped was 100% sarcastic.
• The Black Eagle Strike Force is pronounced “Schwarz Adler Wehr”.
• Byleth pisses off Edelgard by saying she’s trying too hard to be cool.
• Gilbert asks Annette for forgiveness, not the Goddess.
• Rhea makes it sounds less like Cyril died in this battle.

Previous: Chapter 11 (Black Eagles) | Next: Chapter 13 (Crimson Flower)

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白雲の章　White Clouds Chapter
天馬の節　Pegasus Moon
深遠の玉座　The Recondite Throne

Summary of changes:

• Rhea specifies says “my wish” rather than “our dearest wishes” will come true.
• Rhea is more direct in tasking the students to be at the ceremony.
• The Coronation is less verbose.
• Rather than believing he could have done more, Ionius IX believed he did nothing for Edelgard.
• Lindhart’s shock was specifically that their own nation was responsible.
• Edelgard doesn’t say to kill those who oppose, just that she allows it.
• Rhea invokes the Lord to say Edelgard must die.

Previous: Chapter 10 (Black Eagles) | Next: Chapter 12 (Crimson Flower) | Alternate: Chapter 12 (Silver Snow)

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白雲の章　White Clouds Chapter
守護の節　Guardian Moon
女神の行方　The Goddess’ Whereabouts

Summary of changes:

• The literal translation of the Immaculate One is “The White One”.
• Edelgard intentionally used insensitive remarks as a test of Byleth’s current judgement.
• Monica and Kronya’s girly personality was toned down quite a bit.
• Thales had a rebuttal to the Flame Emperor’s sass.
• Byleth’s response to Rhea trying to stop him is less aggressive.
• Leonie is more expressive when facing Kronya.
• Hubert had a lot of confidence that Byleth is alive.
• Edelgard calls Solon’s spell circumstantial and did not believe Byleth was defeated.
• Sothis compares a boulder to a boar for some reason.
• Sothis calls herself what the First Dragons are also called in Fire Emblem Fates.
• Sothis’ time speech in the Smash trailer is closer to the original than the game’s trailer.
• Edelgard is audibly pissed that Goddess gave Byleth her power.
• Rhea makes many references to weaving when talking about time and creation.

Previous: Chapter 9 (Black Eagles) | Next: Chapter 11 (Black Eagles)

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白雲の章　White Clouds Chapter
星辰の節　Constellation Moon
涙のわけ　A Reason for Tears

Summary of changes:

• One of Manuela’s White Heron Cup lines was too naughty for English audiences.
• The Bernadetta fish lines are hard to translate.
• A very well setup Petra joke where she mistakens the ball for a fighting competition is almost impossible to translate.
• Localization avoided deciding what word to call a group of Demonic Beasts.
• Jeralt was already onto the idea that the Demonic Beasts were the students.
• Monika’s persona is just a cutesy schoolgirl and is not as intensely degrading towards Jeralt.
• Jeralt calls your tears a parting gift, which is why he thanks you.
• Sothis is much more supportive of the idea that Jeralt’s death was not fate.
• Byleth explicitly swears to take revenge by killing Jeralt’s killer.
• Jeralt describes Rhea’s condition as panic when hearing baby Byleth was dead.
• The second response to Alois in Jeralt’s room was changed drastically.
• There is a negative connotation in Sothis’ relation to Byleth.

Previous: Chapter 8 (Black Eagles) | Next: Chapter 10 (Black Eagles)

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白雲の章　White Clouds Chapter
赤狼の節　Red Wolf Moon
炎と闇の蠢動　Squirming of the Darkness and Flames

Summary of changes:

• Hubert doesn’t tell Edelgard she has to use “that”, just to think about whether to use it.
• Edelgard swears in disgust and Byleth makes an insensitive joke about it.
• Solon does not consider himself the savior of all, just the savior of mankind.
• A dying villager crying for his mommy was censored.
• Dialogue between Jeralt and Flame Emperor appears more diplomatic.
• House Ordelia is House Cordelia in the Japanese version.

Previous: Chapter 7 (Black Eagles) | Next: Chapter 9 (Black Eagles)

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白雲の章　White Clouds Chapter
飛竜の節　Flying Dragon Moon
鷲獅子の野　Field of the Eagle and Lion

Summary of changes:

• Hubert does a Hanneman impression.
• Manuela is less braggadocious than her English counterpart.
• Ferdinand’s insult to Hubert is stronger.
• Petra specifically says she will hunt “the lions and the deer”.
• Dimitri tells everyone not to hold grudges.
• Claude asks you not to one-shot him so he can gauge the Sword of the Creator.
• Claude scares Edelgard with specifically a parent and child rat pair.
• Byleth wants victory wine to celebrate.
• Lindhart interrupts Edelgard from saying something
• Sothis reveals Remire Village helped out you and Jeralt many times, not just a place you’ve been.

Previous: Chapter 6 (Black Eagles) | Next: Chapter 8 (Black Eagles)

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白雲の章　White Clouds Chapter
角弓の節　Horn Bow Moon
死神の噂　Rumors of a Reaper

Summary of changes:

• Death Knight just wants a death match with Byleth in their battle line.
• Death Knight’s defeat line is very vague as to who the subject and target is.
• The Flame Emperor wants to return the world to how it should be, meaning it was once that way before?
• Jeralt complains harder about the church working him too hard.

Previous: Chapter 5 (Black Eagles) | Next: Chapter 7 (Black Eagles)

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